1. Excellent reminders that things have to flow. So often my markups say “TRANSITION” in big, red letters. I love your examples. Most of my scenes switch POV characters, so showing the ‘same’ thing from the other character’s POV helps ground the reader.

    Terry’s Place

  2. Transitions are not often mentioned in writing tips. Years ago I constructed a whole notebook of sample transitions, and found it just the other day. I’ll add your samples to my file.

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